Fanfic meme from Sealy McWheely

Pick one of my stories and I'll do a commentary on it.

Glorious delights are situated ici - http://www.randomscribbles.co.uk/
et ici - http://www.fanfiction.net/u/800499/

Although I have already done commentraries for Janapurna and Life Is Beautiful so it ain't worth me doing them again!