The Specials, complete!
Jun. 19th, 2007 10:14 pmOoooh, it's all Thundery out. What weather.
Well! The first draft of The Specials is now done-diddley-un. Needs, to paraphrase Cilla Black, a Lorra Lorra Editing. It's currently 13500 words, needs a lot of pruning and an awful lot of work in the first scenes especially re pacing, character... pretty much everything.
However, I am now going to let it lie for a week or so before returning to it. Here's the end (of, potentially, the pilot episode) - everything post the drugged polos.
( We've got Guess Who, Buckeroo, Cluedo, Ludo... )
Well! The first draft of The Specials is now done-diddley-un. Needs, to paraphrase Cilla Black, a Lorra Lorra Editing. It's currently 13500 words, needs a lot of pruning and an awful lot of work in the first scenes especially re pacing, character... pretty much everything.
However, I am now going to let it lie for a week or so before returning to it. Here's the end (of, potentially, the pilot episode) - everything post the drugged polos.
( We've got Guess Who, Buckeroo, Cluedo, Ludo... )